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Aaaand... this is the second chapter of my Pokéumans spin-off story!
I hope you like it.
PREVIOUS CHAPTER: [link]
(I ask you, dear reader, to be not too hard with any spelling or grammar mistakes or unfitting words because I know that it may be full of it since I had to translate the story from German to English.) <- this is what I said a year ago. It's not valid anymore, because now I prefer constructive criticism regarding both the story itself and the grammar.
And of course I would like to know if you like my story!
edit: Why hasn't anybody told me I had written that Pokéumans would transform within two days? Why had I written that anyway? Whatever, it is fixed now. o_ô
Leon the Golem © Me
Adam the Salamence © Me
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I hope you like it.
PREVIOUS CHAPTER: [link]
(I ask you, dear reader, to be not too hard with any spelling or grammar mistakes or unfitting words because I know that it may be full of it since I had to translate the story from German to English.) <- this is what I said a year ago. It's not valid anymore, because now I prefer constructive criticism regarding both the story itself and the grammar.
And of course I would like to know if you like my story!
edit: Why hasn't anybody told me I had written that Pokéumans would transform within two days? Why had I written that anyway? Whatever, it is fixed now. o_ô
Leon the Golem © Me
Adam the Salamence © Me
©
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First two chapters are AWESOME! Way better than my story. Love the details!